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Wednesday 19 June 2019

Waterfall



Approaching the waterfall my shoes stepped in to a sloppy area. As I looked down in a grossed out mood there was a load of mud squishy as slime. While walking along the muddy path, I heard a swarm load full of bees well that’s what I thought, but really it was a rushing waterfall thundering down creating a humongous splash. `` I thought you said there’s going to be chirping birds nearby?’’ Said Bob ‘’ There are birds it’s just to loud because the waterfall, you can hear them if you go back to the green lush trees’’ said John. Soon on the waterfall poured down sparkling clean water, nice and fresh. Simply spectacular water sprinkled over the pool as I bombed into the pool. I got out of the glorious pool and sat in the shade near the trees. Looking all around me I saw trees and bushes with friendly singing birds chirping that made me feel peaceful. The big slippery rocks were hard to get over, over the rocks were the awesome diving boards. Once more I bombed, all water near me extended all over the pool like it was a friendly water monster grabbing out for a big huge hug.

3 comments:

  1. This is a fantastic story Jin! Well done for working so hard on it. I like how you drew a picture of you doing a bomb just like in your story!

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  2. Cool picture Jin i'm from Glen-Taylor I feel like swimming.

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  3. Cool story its a very creative picture.

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