DMIC follow up week 9

Omaru creek

Once upon a time there was creek called Omaru creek. Omaru creek is a polluted place. Most of the fish are dead because of the rubbish. There are only eels living in the creek. Some trees are dying. There are slimy plants everywhere. Some eels are dead because of the rubbish too. Ducks can go in to the creek because they can fly away and float. There was an eel called Max he had big teeth and thin black skin. He has green eyes too. One sunny hot afternoon Max the eel was looking in the polluted Omaru creek for food he saw a little piece of rubbish and he thought it was food but then he said no I will not eat this. Then the tunnel under ground started to push Max never to found. Max was hot then he found nice and cold water and went strat to it. 

Nice and cold said Max. Suddenly Max found a mysterious hole in the ground Max said. Where will this led me?. So he slivered down into the hole. Inside the hole was strange humans called the sharks it said on there jackets. One of the strange humans saw Max so he got his big knife and tried to cut Max. But then someone came to the rescue Max falls asleep. The guy that rescued Max turns out to be Max's father. Where am I?. Wait! This looks like my old home! Max's Dad came out from the shadows and shows himself Max said. Dad where were you. You are not ready for the would yet. The the strange humans broke right in Max's home Max's Dad and him escaped and finally they lived happily ever after.