Friday 31 July 2020
Thursday 30 July 2020
Wednesday 29 July 2020
Tuesday 28 July 2020
Monday 27 July 2020
Wednesday 22 July 2020
Tuesday 21 July 2020
Monday 20 July 2020
Keeping Track Of My Work (all the way from the beginning)
This is my work all the way back when I was a new-schooler, (a Pt Englander that is). I hope you love this new first day at school activity I did -from the holidays.
Friday 3 July 2020
Editing Writing!
Today Lynette, legacy and I went onto Lynette's writing and noticed that she did more telling than showing.This meant that she wrote more sentences like this: (Example) I went to the pools. Instead of that we added more detail and in 'I went to the pools' into what the car ride was to the pools or if you walked on foot to the pool. Go see her unedited writing on this link: Lynette and legacy at: Legacy
Lynette, Legacy, Jin and Miss West Edit
On Saturday night, my friend Paulah and I sat under a blanket of warmth which streamed down from the setting sun. In the distance we saw the grey back of what we could only assume was some different kind of mammal. It looked a bit like a mermaid! With excitement, we looked at each other and realised we had the same idea. We pulled our togs quickly out of our bags and whipped them on! Then we skipped our way to the water.
We could hear a fresh calming breeze and it was flowing gently through our hair. There was a beautiful splashing noise which was the waves and the changing tide. I could feel the cold water and the seaweed squelched between my toes.
Suddenly the mermaid-like creature surrounded us.
I could feel a light swift movement brush over my arm. I tried to hold my breath under the water to see what it was, and what I saw was amazing to look at. It was a West Indian Manatee touching my arm.
When I came back up for air I saw that Paulah had a massive grin that had spread across her
face. At once, I knew that she had also seen the beautiful creature that I had just witnessed.
Thursday 2 July 2020
Great White Attack!
I could feel the fear running through my body. My eyes bulged out of their sockets and my arms waved in panic, causing water to splash everywhere -into the air. The great white shark swam slightly left to right towards my slippers. In defense I scaredly snatched my harpoon gun from my hip potch and pointed it at the shark. The shark was intensely closer each second. My hands were shaking and I flipped my flippers to keep my afloat. It was a life or death situation.
Wednesday 1 July 2020
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